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托福考試寫(xiě)作范文：戶(hù)外運(yùn)動(dòng)&科技產(chǎn)品

Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smart phone, video games for fun and entertainment, some people believe that playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children\'s development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 現(xiàn)在，孩子們過(guò)度依賴(lài)科技產(chǎn)品， 例如計(jì)算機(jī)、智能手機(jī)、電子游戲。 有人認(rèn)為玩玩具或和朋友們戶(hù)外游戲?qū)τ诤⒆觽儼l(fā)展更加有益，是否認(rèn)同?(2016年2月28日)

托福寫(xiě)作考點(diǎn)分析：

2018年1月23日剛剛考察學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該玩游戲，2月28日再次考察相同主題，只是換成孩子們是應(yīng)該玩游戲還是戶(hù)外運(yùn)動(dòng)。可見(jiàn)考試周報(bào)解析對(duì)于寫(xiě)作備考的重要性。托福寫(xiě)作即體現(xiàn)冷題回補(bǔ)，又體現(xiàn)熱題恒熱的特征。建議童鞋勤于練筆，寫(xiě)作自然水到渠成。

托福寫(xiě)作相關(guān)考題：

Some people believe that video games could inspire young students’ interest and make their study more efficient rather than distracting them and a waste of time, so young students should be allowed to play video games. Do you agree or disagree? 有人認(rèn)為游戲可以激發(fā)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)興趣，提高他們學(xué)習(xí)效率，而不是分散他們的精力和浪費(fèi)他們的時(shí)間，是否認(rèn)同? (2016年1月23日)

托福寫(xiě)作立場(chǎng)表明：孩子們應(yīng)該被鼓勵(lì)以簡(jiǎn)單玩具或戶(hù)外運(yùn)動(dòng)的方式來(lái)放松娛樂(lè)。

① 笑笑三歲了，三歲的笑笑已經(jīng)可以熟練使用I-phone 手機(jī)，喜歡看“關(guān)頭強(qiáng)”和“喜洋洋”，喜歡打I-pad 的街機(jī)三國(guó)，他甚至知道游戲人物張飛，李典，夏侯?lèi)取?o:p>

② 回想我的童年時(shí)代，小鵬哥的娛樂(lè)方式無(wú)比簡(jiǎn)單：丟沙包、跳房子、做迷藏、騎馬打仗……，這些戶(hù)外運(yùn)動(dòng)，經(jīng)濟(jì)而健康，我和小伙伴們呼吸著新鮮空氣，親近大自然。相比個(gè)體性的娛樂(lè)方式，群體性的經(jīng)驗(yàn)成長(zhǎng)讓我們感受快樂(lè)的同時(shí)，也結(jié)實(shí)了一生的好友。

網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲或手機(jī)娛樂(lè)的利弊

① 電子游戲以其制作精美、音效絕佳、圖文并茂、情節(jié)誘人等特征得以流行。 適度地玩游戲也是一種放松身心的方式，同時(shí)，競(jìng)技類(lèi)游戲?qū)τ诤⒆觽兊闹橇﹂_(kāi)發(fā)有一定的利好。

② 競(jìng)技類(lèi)的電子游戲易使玩家上癮，尤其是對(duì)于缺乏自律性的孩子而言，過(guò)于沉迷電子游戲容易使孩子們孤獨(dú)、自閉、社交方面力不從心。

戶(hù)外運(yùn)動(dòng)或簡(jiǎn)單游戲的好處

① 戶(hù)外運(yùn)動(dòng)有益健康，孩子們可以親近自然，健體強(qiáng)身。

② 群體成長(zhǎng)有益孩子，群體性游戲鍛煉孩子們的社交能力、培養(yǎng)孩子們的合作意識(shí)，同時(shí)，使玩家收獲珍貴的友誼。

③ 陪孩子們做一些簡(jiǎn)單的親子游戲是很好的增強(qiáng)家庭紐帶的方式。

托福寫(xiě)作范文賞析：

首段

Children tend to revel in high-tech products such as smart phone or on-line games, sometimes without being aware of doing so. Sure enough，they can have a merry mood when they amuse themselves by playing computer games or mobile phones. My stand，however，is that going outside for amusement or playing simpler toys is more preferable and feasible in terms of providing those who are in the formative years with beneficial enjoyment.

二段

Indeed, games provided by high-tech products enjoy tremendous popularity amongst children and their peculiar fascination can be owed to their unique merits. More precisely, video games are characteristic of vivid pictures, appealing music or unexpected challenge, which presents players witha good source of relaxation. Meanwhile, the process of surmounting difficulties in the virtual world can still enable children to have a creative mind and thus improve their decision-making or crisis-solving abilities. However, as children lack self-discipline, the chances that they will ever be able to take up physical exercises or befriend with peers are remote，especially considering that the amount of time young kids spend watching television or playing games is astonishing. Even worse，children often ignore the outside world as a result of the addition.

三段

Embarking on outdoor activities or opting for simpler toys，as a commendable hobby， is quite different and has many visible merits. For a start, playing outdoor games with friends is physically beneficial because children can breathe the fresh air, stretch their bodies and enjoy the closeness to nature. This debate reminds me of my childhood, I was keen on catching dragonflies, butterflies, fish, and crickets in summer or playing snow fight with my close friends in winter. What we reaped were joyous childhood and healthy physique. Also,growing experience, via associating and communicating with peers, makes a child sociable and optimistic, with no time for boredom. Instead of isolating oneself, having fun outside with friends makes a child lean to cooperate with mates and unite congenial peers, in this way, one\'s circle of friends grows. Eventually, accompanying children to play simpler games such as block building, flying paper plane, poker card game is an effective way to strengthen the parent-child relationship.

尾段

My stand is that although high-tech products can provide relaxation for leisure hours, electronic games will inevitably bright about sedentary lifestyle, poor eyesight and even obesity. Thereby, children should be encouraged to play simpler toys or do physical exercises with friends. Imaginably, the family tie can be strengthened and a child’s group experience can be fostered.

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